I need to work on my procedure because Amelia's origami whale didn't turn out very well also I need to work on my instructions and make them clearer so Amelia can understand me. Next time I write a procedure I will work hard to make these instructions clear.
Hi Rhiannon,
ReplyDeleteWell done on your reflection. You have worked really hard on your procedure writing following the structure beginning with a title, goal, materials and instructions as well as starting each sentence with a new connective. Making our instructions really clear is important though, because the whole point of writing a procedure is so that someone else can make the same thing or do the activity that we break the steps down for. I look forward to reading more of your procedures with your clear instructions.
From Mrs Head